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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Galione, Oct 27, 2009.

  1. Galione

    Galione Well-Known Member

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    but feel free to tear it apart critiques are appreciated as always

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    v2 contrast render adjustment
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    v3 blur taken off gun
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    v4 experiment with the lighting
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    I like the blending on the back of his neck but the red on his arm looks out f place.
    Blurry gun doesn't look good.
    Idk it's kind of bland with just a bunch of displace filters everywhere.
    Text is not the best, but the lighting is good.
     
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    i like the smudging and colouring its very good, but i feel the tag is brought down in ranks by the text and line work you have places in the bottom left and top right of the piece, its odd, and disturbes the flow
     
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    updated
     
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    Vers 4 is cool just take the dots n the corners away.
    I like how the red isnt so strong now.
    And the unblurred gun flows better imo
     
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    i think version 2 is the best one, the 3rd is too empty in my opinion
    i really like it
     
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    hah I totally thought I put the dot layer on hide but I guess I missed it lol thanks for the feedback guys
     

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