Lil Wayne - .murmur_

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  1. .Murmur_

    .Murmur_ Well-Known Member

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    CnC please.
    Try to keep your negative opinions about Weezy to yourself. :P

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    Its cool, but weezy ******* and ***** ****
    haha jk i did those * myself
    even though it has alot of white space the render and effects around it really look nice except for that one on his right (looking at him, his left) dreads looks like an over sharpened color line. Idk maybe smudge it out.
     
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    .Murmur_ Well-Known Member

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    lmao.
    Thanks for the crit.
    I was going for a simple background with lots of effects. I don't see what youre talking about on the right of him in the picture lol. But thanks anyway.
     
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    Too much white space... I've seen some really nice tags with lots of white space, but you've got to nail it...
    But the effects look good around him. I'd expand them a lot.
     
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    lol the thing circled in green. maybe you could smudge it out to match the smudging with the rest of the tag.
    sorry if im being to _____ (theres a word for this kind of thing)
    but i wanted to show you what i meant =D
     
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    Thanks birdunit. I see what you mean now. :P
    It means a lot to actually put effort into helping me improve.
     
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    And thank you for actually trying to improve yourself from the knowledge of others.
     

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