Phoenix

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  1. AnythingPink

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    Version 3 located above.. ^

    Version 2 below V
     
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    Its nice but the eye on the left is wierd...I see what your doing but looks outta place.
     
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    nice concept,but it seems too plain,basic.kinda like a rush job.and the colors are STRONG,they could stand to be toned down a bit. i think i understand what you were trying to do,but it seems as if it would benefit you to read a few tuts.keep it up tho,if you have the .psd maybe you can do some more work on it ^_^
     
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    Well.. Honestly, I tried taking my time with this Flux. Yesterday as I was making it.. It came out horribly wrong, so I have to re do it with a completely different render. Then this morning I added the finishing touches. I also wanted the colors to be strong, because that is the personality the Phoenix has. But I'll remove the eye on the left, maybe put in a c4d or something. Thanks for the comments though, I'll try and improve it.
     
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    *bump* added new version
     
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    looks plain
    work on ur text,colours and lighting
     
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    all too yellow
    no reall light/focal point makes it seeem eveenn more flat
     
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    K, I can safely say V2 is somewhat better.. Don't know how I could improve it though.
     

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