Vegeta Lp

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by aLaYeR, Aug 1, 2008.

  1. aLaYeR

    aLaYeR Well-Known Member

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    ok this for tourny on anotha forum

    topaz
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    no topaz
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    how they be?
    CnC plz
     
  2. Iron

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    Keep the topaz one.
    Near his left foot there is a cloudish blur that should be removed or
    lower the opacity(if its a big cloud then just use the eraser tool set it to 50% and erase that area a bit it will still show but ppl wont notice it.
    There's a greenish glow/blur near his right calves, bit down from his crotch plus its a lil white with the greenish glow take care of that also.
    Considering it's a DBZ character they produce a lot of power/ki you could glow/lighten up the light strings around his body.
    Don't forget to lower the opacity on the glow tho so people wont be blind by all the blurness going on if it doesn't look good to you,
    of course take it out.

    Also the text position isn't good, i suggest put it in the corner somewhere
     
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    aLaYeR Well-Known Member

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    hmm.. thenx for the good CnC
     
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    It just looks like a big sig to be honest. You've failed to spot the transition between a large piece and a sig.

    I reckon you worked on this the same way you would work on a sig.

    You don't need to add the type. I would just get rid of it.

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