dude... what happened to the right of the render? the rest is sex, even tho text is too far from the focal for my taste. I'd keep working on it if I were you, it's got a lot of potential but the whole part to the right of the render ruins it (starting with the white stuff)
haha yea the left of the render is pretty messed up but everything besides the text (because it strains my eyes) is good.
if you don't mind me suggesting something, I'd cover up that whole part with a clipping mask or something, and then putting a new render layer to the front (same render and position, i mean), erasisng the left side with a soft brush, so you could try to blend the right side of the render in a better way. that's only an idea, if you want to keep wotking on this instead than moving on to something else