nice concept,but it seems too plain,basic.kinda like a rush job.and the colors are STRONG,they could stand to be toned down a bit. i think i understand what you were trying to do,but it seems as if it would benefit you to read a few tuts.keep it up tho,if you have the .psd maybe you can do some more work on it ^_^
Well.. Honestly, I tried taking my time with this Flux. Yesterday as I was making it.. It came out horribly wrong, so I have to re do it with a completely different render. Then this morning I added the finishing touches. I also wanted the colors to be strong, because that is the personality the Phoenix has. But I'll remove the eye on the left, maybe put in a c4d or something. Thanks for the comments though, I'll try and improve it.