Your light source is wayyy to LIGHT and theres not that much depth. Try cleaning up your tag and making the flow go to the focal. I Hope I Helped
Waay too bright, as nan said b4. Also, don't like the effects done on the BG around the Focal. Distracts from the Focal, and the Focal should always be where the eyes go first. Don't like the black spot on the left side of the tag. Text could be better, and I dont' understand what the cross-like thing is being used for. It's just waisted space IMO. Work on your effects and Text.
Let's be serious guys. It doesn't matter who wins because next round it's either DEAP or Fallen lol. But Beavo I like this one as I said before. The Colours are very sensual. The text doesn't make me wish that PhotoShop be removed from your computer, and the overall feel is quite pleasant.