Edward Elric

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Soji, Jan 3, 2009.

  1. Soji

    Soji Well-Known Member

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    A bit strange isn't it?

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  2. jeremybdman

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    Well it's not bad, it just is a bit chaotic. I think the thing that throws me off the most is the left side of the picture where you've placed the text. It really throws the flow off. The concept is great, just work on that flow a bit, so it looks a bit more cohesive.
     
  3. Soji

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    So should i just leave out the text? =/

    Cause placing it in other places doesnt really do any good x.x
     
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    No text + less brightness next to eddeh and it would be better imo
     
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    Its a bit different, Its good that you have your own stlye.. but im not feelin it
    Sorry :(
     
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    I like the 1st one with the sprinkles. Nice work!
     
  7. Soji

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    Kay thanks for the comments everyone.

    Added a new Version :eek:
     
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    Dont rly see a vocal and flow, dont rly like it
     
  9. brandontoh

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    Hmm...I think you need to improve on the flow, and try to blend the render a bit mroe into the bg.
     
  10. Soji

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    So how do i improve the flow? o-O;
     
  11. brandontoh

    brandontoh Guest

    The liquified part on the left, and also the sticking out liquified part on the right can be removed.
     

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