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  1. Dreamery

    Dreamery Well-Known Member

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    V2: (Change in lighting/color)
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    V3: (Change in style, lighter/simple style)
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    My first real-life stock tag since I came back. :lol:
    Don't have much time to make tags nowadays so I might use this for the Sotw.


    - all defaults
    - PS7
    <strike>- 44 layers</strike> around 55 layers now

    I need to improve coloring. -_-
    C&c would be great! ^_^

    *Added version 2 and 3.
     
  2. yish_2220

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    Nice concept, but I think the lighting's too bright. OMG is that an 18-yr-and-abv-only stock?
     
  3. Dreamery

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    Lighting? Alright, thank you for the suggestion. (& of course not. Who uses content like that?)
     
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    looks great
    the only other thing i would do is fix that random white line, make the text that says distania a little more noticiable, smooth everything out cause atm it looks a little sharp, and and fill up the the space to the left of her a little bit more
    but overall great tag
    8/10
     
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    Thank you for providing detailed suggestions! I really appreciate it. :)

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    I have tried to fix the lighting/color/style with two new versions. It would be great to get feedback on which you believe is best.
    Thank you!
     
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    V3 FTW man .. nice work i like it alot.
     
  7. Dreamery

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    V3? Alright then. Thank you so much! ^_^
     
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    nice but i think in the top one the lighting is way to strong and the lil text near her arm i think u should take that out for sure.

    v22 is so much better the text looks better with that line aswell,colouring is beter but now it seems there could be some lightign near her head lol which would be a lot better,

    v3 is good aswell the lighting is a lot better in this one, im confused which one is better 2 or 3 lol..but i love the text in 2 so combine them to and u will have a great sig.
     
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    V2 looks good out of the first 2...the 3rd one is my favorite overall...
     
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    @v3
    hey you took my advice ^_^
    i love the new one gj on it
     
  11. Dreamery

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    Alright, thank you for all your feedback. I'll try to combine v2 & 3. :P


    V3? Ok, thank you. :)

    Yup, I just decided to change the overall style. ^_^
    Thank you. :)
     
  12. xX Kr3W Boy

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    I Like v1 and v3 Good job on these.
     
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    v2 would be much better if the left side wasn't so dark, but V3 for now.

    Nice work there with the simple style, I like it. :]
     
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    i like v3 better :)
     
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    loving V3...love the sig man
     

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