Here's my latest! I like it, but some things didn't go as planned. Oh well, it still turned out pretty good imo. ^_^ CnC plz. ^_^
she seems a lil sharp( i really notice it on the single srand of hair that jumps over a pixel xD) but everything else is like sex, awesome
I like the flow and c4d placement. I do think it could use a few accents of another color or 2 though. The text looks good as well.
I love the use of the pink rectangles next to the text, verrry nice. CD4s fit, but yeah, she is a tad sharp.
Ahhh, yeah, I know she's sharp. Was a resize problem though, not over sharpen. -_- Really appreciate the comments guys. Yeah, Mono-tono-ohno. I'll work on coloring. ^_^ Lighting was a big-fat-turd on this one as well. I couldn't do it. lol Thanks all.
COMPO. i can't believe no-one said anythign about compo. more than anything else, the really boring center placement of the render is hurting you. text is great, a little blur on the sides and some judicious dodge/burn would really help.
i like the colours however i dont think the renders the best it looks a bit dull and jus way to white for sum reason and the c4ds placed i dont think they work. I guess u can try darken the render a lil maybe.