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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Hoplite_A2, Nov 22, 2007.

  1. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    Here's my latest!
    I like it, but some things didn't go as planned. Oh well, it still turned out pretty good imo. ^_^

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    CnC plz. ^_^
     
  2. Daecu

    Daecu Senior Member

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    she seems a lil sharp( i really notice it on the single srand of hair that jumps over a pixel xD) but everything else is like sex, awesome :)
     
  3. bryan_el_rabano

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    liken the text
    bit mono tho'
     
  4. CA410

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    I really like the effects and text, but it's a tad monotone in places.
     
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    text is really nice, but work on depth and lighting
     
  6. CarpeDiem

    CarpeDiem Well-Known Member

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    I like the flow and c4d placement. I do think it could use a few accents of another color or 2 though.

    The text looks good as well.
     
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    I love the use of the pink rectangles next to the text, verrry nice. CD4s fit, but yeah, she is a tad sharp.
     
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    Focal is way too jaggy, lay of the sharpen ;P

    Nice colors here though
     
  9. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    Ahhh,
    yeah, I know she's sharp.
    Was a resize problem though, not
    over sharpen. -_-

    Really appreciate the comments guys. ;)

    Yeah,
    Mono-tono-ohno. :(

    I'll work on coloring. ^_^
    Lighting was a big-fat-turd on this one as well.
    I couldn't do it. lol

    Thanks all.
     
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    its the sharpness that puts it off imo
     
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    little sharp on the render
     
  12. PhanE

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    Nice colors but i can't help but feel something is missing
     
  13. [.BC.] entropy

    [.BC.] entropy Well-Known Member

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    COMPO.

    i can't believe no-one said anythign about compo.

    more than anything else, the really boring center placement of the render is hurting you.

    text is great, a little blur on the sides and some judicious dodge/burn would really help.
     
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    i like the colours however i dont think the renders the best it looks a bit dull and jus way to white for sum reason and the c4ds placed i dont think they work. I guess u can try darken the render a lil maybe.
     
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    I think it's awesome. :) Great job.
     

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