Text is terrible. C4d is bad, a bad color, and from the looks of it, a bad c4d. Next time make the render smaller, and a tad closer to the middle, but usually not right in the middle. Try blending in the render some.
lol ok guys i really couldnt edit it for some reason yesterday, but now i can. does anyone know any good fonts because i cant find and good ones..... ty.
jesus its his third sig. which means hes new so ease up yeah? i really like this one. the bg suits halo because its kinda spacey. the effects in the bg are interesting. text could be improved, but awesome job bro. i suggest checking out the tutorial forum for some usefull tips. keep it goin man