This one is meh... spent about 30 minutes on it. Lighting is very bad here lo, but I put it in early on so I don't think I'll be able to change it. Though I do like how the text came out even if it is bad. And as always C&C much appreciated.
as you said the lighting is bad, and the text doesnt fit in with the rest of the tag. try a photofilter on cyan and blurring the people at the sides. maybe some clipping masks would help clean it up a bit.