Well it's not bad, it just is a bit chaotic. I think the thing that throws me off the most is the left side of the picture where you've placed the text. It really throws the flow off. The concept is great, just work on that flow a bit, so it looks a bit more cohesive.
So should i just leave out the text? =/ Cause placing it in other places doesnt really do any good x.x
The liquified part on the left, and also the sticking out liquified part on the right can be removed.