Too much stuff going on. Try making it with more flow, the way so my eyes aren't jumping everywhere. You Get Me? BTW, scan lines KILL, its too hard to use them successfully in tags. Not bad. You have the basics down.
o.o, w/e you used to make those lines don't use again, or try not to get that outcome with w/e you used.
I honestly have no idea how they got there... I dug this one up from a while back. And I don't think it's a matter of too much going on, I think I just need to blur some junk.