way too monotone. theres no depth in the background. theres some weird brushing on the right side of the render on her hair. improve the text, and bg and should look pretty good
Nice smudging but there's a lack of effects and I think it would be better with colors. Any ways, it keeps a nice signature.
Needs more contrast and the text needs to be fixed. Depth is also lacking, but that could be fixed with better contrast. Not bad, but could be much better imo.