Halo

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Pasta is Pasta, Dec 23, 2007.

  1. Pasta is Pasta

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    It's a really bad render.. I know. And it's my 3rd sig and 1st with c4d.

    CnC please :tongue: .
     
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    its o.k dont rly like the text nor the back needs more 2 it IMO
     
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    Text is terrible. C4d is bad, a bad color, and from the looks of it, a bad c4d. Next time make the render smaller, and a tad closer to the middle, but usually not right in the middle.
    Try blending in the render some.
     
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    lol ok guys i really couldnt edit it for some reason yesterday, but now i can. does anyone know any good fonts because i cant find and good ones.....

    ty.
     
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    you have to work on the composition blending and effects on this one
     
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    jesus its his third sig. which means hes new so ease up yeah?
    i really like this one. the bg suits halo because its kinda spacey. the effects in the bg are interesting. text could be improved, but awesome job bro. i suggest checking out the tutorial forum for some usefull tips. keep it goin man
     
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    JL's a real tough critic, =P He does give alot of usefull information, just in a harsher-manner.
     
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