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SomeSaySTiCk
11-12-2008, 12:54 AM
http://dump.stoleyour.net/uploads/74fb652842.jpg

http://dump.stoleyour.net/uploads/e6d7fe9dd3.jpg

C&C

spartan117
11-12-2008, 10:31 PM
i'd recommend increasing the dof and contrast and maybe messing around with the coloring a bit
make it a bit more interesting
its a good pic, its just the kind of thing youd see in a scrapbook rather than a good standalone photo

glimjo
11-21-2008, 09:12 PM
Nice job

Its a bit dull though.

}SoC{SainT
11-22-2008, 06:39 PM
I'd brighten up the skin a bit. It looks like it was taken on a cloudy day or in the shade and needs a bit more contrast. And Beatty is correct, a shallower DoF would probably make it better. The shoulder is a bit distracting, and with a shallow DoF, it would be a bit less so.

Black and white one looks better imho. But the main issue I think is that you went and just removed all the saturation. For a good B&W conversion you need to mess with the color channels to add contrast. B&W is all about showing contrast :)


Nice shot, good framing :). Rule of thirds pwnz.

iK3VRR
12-30-2008, 02:31 AM
Dont know much aoout photography but I like this... IDK y, but I do

Reserection.
12-31-2008, 10:42 PM
coloured its soo clear though you should blur the body i guess