View Full Version : Playboy Tag ;)
03-30-2008, 12:41 AM
Ha! Now that I got your attention.............................
03-30-2008, 10:59 AM
There is too much I think, it looks messy.
Try to point out the focal point a bit more.
03-31-2008, 01:41 AM
Really messy hun. Needs more flow and a cleaner feel. It's really not workin' for me. The focal and depth for sure need work. Keep up the work, and read some tutorials when you have the time. You'll improve. :)
03-31-2008, 03:19 AM
Very messy like they said, but has a lot of potential.
03-31-2008, 03:34 AM
no playboy? =(
too messy. and kill the text.
03-31-2008, 04:58 AM
as the others have said, and sharpen up the focal.
Nice start :)
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