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11-18-2007, 02:47 PM
hey all, made new sorta LP

http://mami1337.deviantart.com/art/the-exp...-chief-70094166 (http://mami1337.deviantart.com/art/the-exploding-chief-70094166)

please CnC @ deviantart :)

is this a tutorial worth? its 40 layers (including adjustlayers)


54 layers this one :) version 2

11-21-2007, 02:20 PM
I think it's pretty amazing! I like it! GJ!

11-21-2007, 04:46 PM
The part where the ship is supposed to be doesn't look wonderful. I suggest you fill out the bottom part with some more white and perhaps do a little stream of white in between where you have your current ones.

11-22-2007, 02:02 PM
ok ombre, gonna look what i can do bout it, thnx for your comments both :)

11-22-2007, 03:21 PM
Yeah its a tut worthy imo

11-23-2007, 04:34 AM
ok, thanks for the comment, already writing the tutorial ;) and im fixing the last things ombre is saying, you'll hear more from me bout it :)

11-23-2007, 01:27 PM
here's the old one too: http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/2480/halo3seniorsergeant1169gq6.png

new version : http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/462/mamisprayha7.jpg

say whats the best :)

11-23-2007, 03:38 PM
i like v2 more, seems like he's a little brighter but u didnt loose the effectiveness of the light seemingly cast by the explosion, nice stuff ^^

11-24-2007, 03:57 AM
thanks mate :)

11-24-2007, 02:38 PM
2 is best ;)

11-25-2007, 08:07 AM
k thnx :) bump

11-25-2007, 09:03 AM
A helicopter is missing rawr, would be so damn cool if it was a helicopter back there in the blue.
That would look freakin awesome.

Anyways, Idk. it doest feel right.
Text is standing out too much.

11-25-2007, 09:55 AM
@ helicopter, nah doesnt work, gotto make wind effects everywhere, would be too much work. maybe on the next work, nice idea though :)

thnx for your critism, it always helps me ;)

11-25-2007, 11:03 AM
I love it, it looks perfect.

11-27-2007, 10:27 AM
wow thats well nice i realy like ur style :)

11-28-2007, 02:50 PM
thank you both :)