Young Kakashi

[YoSim01]

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/SigvoorSimonverbetering.png

better than my current sig?

edit:
v2
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/kakashispecialborderkorterbordcopy.png

edit2:
v3
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/kakashispecialborderkorterbord2copy.png

v4
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/kakashispecialborderkorterbord22.png

[`RGB]

way better mate, keep it up

[YoSim01]

thanks ;)

[YoSim01]

Anyone? no tips?

[XuY]

I think its not bad, but too plain for me and i cant really read the text, plus i think if you change the color of the border the background will stand out better.

[YoSim01]

I was thinking the same thing, but I can't come up with ideas to make it less plain (A)
Though most people I asked disagree, I really like this render, and I like the idea of making a tranquil and calm signature, but im unable to do that without making it look plain.
Ill think about the border

[Hoplite_A2]

Yup,
The focul's a little odd too, cause
it's all got that motion blur effect and
it kind of leaves your eyes wandering.

But the render placement's not bad. ;)

Keep up them tuts. :D

[Ini]

Loads better,
everythings great - just i think the lighting is a bit too strong.

[becks]

its much better then ur 1st one looks real good.

[Ferdi_09]

I believe you did a great job on thel lighting :). I also really like what you did with the render itself. Altho' you could make the focal a little more visible. (If there is one already lol.)

Nice. ;)

[Daxter]

It is too flat and text is not so great either

[YoSim01]

Update. improvement?

[YoSim01]

v3....

[Faith.09]

v1 is cool.

[becks]

not bad maybe u need to sharpen the dude coz there no flow or create sum closer to it...dont look to bad so just work on that.