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YoSim01
11-13-2007, 03:27 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/SigvoorSimonverbetering.png

better than my current sig?

edit:
v2
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/kakashispecialborderkorterbordcopy.png

edit2:
v3
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/kakashispecialborderkorterbord2copy.png

v4
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g8/piet24/kakashispecialborderkorterbord22.png

`RGB
11-13-2007, 04:15 PM
way better mate, keep it up

YoSim01
11-14-2007, 08:51 AM
thanks ;)

YoSim01
11-15-2007, 12:11 PM
Anyone? no tips?

XuY
11-15-2007, 05:58 PM
I think its not bad, but too plain for me and i cant really read the text, plus i think if you change the color of the border the background will stand out better.

YoSim01
11-17-2007, 09:49 AM
I was thinking the same thing, but I can't come up with ideas to make it less plain (A)
Though most people I asked disagree, I really like this render, and I like the idea of making a tranquil and calm signature, but im unable to do that without making it look plain.
Ill think about the border

Hoplite_A2
11-17-2007, 09:52 AM
Yup,
The focul's a little odd too, cause
it's all got that motion blur effect and
it kind of leaves your eyes wandering.

But the render placement's not bad. ;)

Keep up them tuts. :D

Ini
11-17-2007, 09:57 AM
Loads better,
everythings great - just i think the lighting is a bit too strong.

becks
11-17-2007, 10:40 AM
its much better then ur 1st one looks real good.

Ferdi_09
11-17-2007, 12:37 PM
I believe you did a great job on thel lighting :). I also really like what you did with the render itself. Altho' you could make the focal a little more visible. (If there is one already lol.)

Nice. ;)

Daxter
11-17-2007, 12:40 PM
It is too flat and text is not so great either

YoSim01
11-30-2007, 12:02 PM
Update. improvement?

YoSim01
12-01-2007, 12:42 PM
v3....

Faith.09
12-01-2007, 02:32 PM
v1 is cool.

becks
12-01-2007, 03:35 PM
not bad maybe u need to sharpen the dude coz there no flow or create sum closer to it...dont look to bad so just work on that.