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Galione

11-04-2007, 11:25 PM

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/ling_yoshima/a-beautiful-death3.png

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/ling_yoshima/a-beautiful-death2.png

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/ling_yoshima/a-beautiful-death.png

which on ya like and what do you think I can work on?

russki

11-05-2007, 01:18 AM

light source, color transition, and depth need a LITTLE bit of work.. but the composition is brilliant and the overall idea is very nice =]

ooohh and i like the 3rd one the most but there really isnt a significant difference between them =/

Galione

11-05-2007, 01:28 AM

I lean towards the 3rd myself and the difference is a slight composition and I mean very slight composition change between the 1st and 2nd one the third one is just the 2nd version just with an added goody

Hoplite_A2

11-05-2007, 04:41 AM

Wowser!
That's really tight! :D :D :D

Nasuul

11-05-2007, 07:39 AM

Sexy.
Amen.

All there is to say.

Galione

11-05-2007, 08:44 AM

thanks for the support guys

msabas

11-05-2007, 12:36 PM

looks really good man keep it up.

Xioushi

11-05-2007, 02:25 PM

The top is very dark, could use some work. The green behind the text is too green, or too opac, maybe lower the visibility of it, I dunno...hm.

Galione

11-06-2007, 08:28 AM

thanks for the advice anymore?

†Red†

11-06-2007, 12:14 PM

That's very nice man...An amazing job well done. I love the concept and the overall idea is great.
Love the colors as well.

Wamm

11-06-2007, 01:52 PM

love the colors

Galione

11-06-2007, 08:08 PM

thanks guys ^_^

Galione

11-12-2007, 08:09 PM

anymore?

Harrison

11-12-2007, 08:45 PM

wow i love it... all amazing

who wrote the text? like originally...i love that last line

"God is Dead and only the ignorant weep."

:)

[.BC.] KriPTiQ

11-13-2007, 10:00 AM

Life the little orbs, reminds me of final fantasy. v1/2 are my favorite. Maybe if you had to change something I would change the colors perhaps. Leave the green though.

Kirz

11-13-2007, 10:10 AM

v3 is my fav. Great work man...I really like it. :D I'm loving the green and bubbles. It reminds me of the laser from Independence Day lol. :D

`RGB

11-13-2007, 11:11 AM

i like it alot
its even better if thats one of your c4d's

~ Art ;

11-13-2007, 08:36 PM

Numero 3!
Looks great man, love the middle of the C4D.

Unknown A

11-15-2007, 07:58 PM

You could of lighten up the top of the LP. Also you could of made it more colorful and add a different text. Overall great job.

Galione

11-19-2007, 09:51 PM

I di the text all except the last line which a quote from Friedrich nietche I believe and it's onetat has stuck with me for a long time.

and thanks for the support guys glad you enjoyed it even just a little bit

Galione

12-14-2007, 07:41 PM

bump lol

Majin

12-14-2007, 08:47 PM

The post work is epic.

Galione

12-15-2007, 12:31 AM

thanks majin

Mortified Penguin

12-15-2007, 04:26 AM

Nigh on perfect. Text is too hard to read. Needs to be bigger or a darker color or sharper.

jason477

12-15-2007, 10:49 AM

near the middle right. its a bit to dark

Galione

12-16-2007, 10:06 PM

yeah I see what ya mean

mmd

12-20-2007, 04:49 PM

nice man, i liket the 2nd.

Matsybom

12-21-2007, 10:34 AM

Second looks best imo :)
only the focal is kinda big :)
would be better if only the tiny dodge lines spot/place would be the main focal.
so mayb a v4 with a that as focal :) ?

Mortified Penguin

12-21-2007, 11:16 PM

<strike>Need MOAR green.</strike>

This is still nice but make text bigger.