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11-04-2007, 11:25 PM
which on ya like and what do you think I can work on?
11-05-2007, 01:18 AM
light source, color transition, and depth need a LITTLE bit of work.. but the composition is brilliant and the overall idea is very nice =]
ooohh and i like the 3rd one the most but there really isnt a significant difference between them =/
11-05-2007, 01:28 AM
I lean towards the 3rd myself and the difference is a slight composition and I mean very slight composition change between the 1st and 2nd one the third one is just the 2nd version just with an added goody
11-05-2007, 04:41 AM
That's really tight! :D :D :D
11-05-2007, 07:39 AM
All there is to say.
11-05-2007, 08:44 AM
thanks for the support guys
11-05-2007, 12:36 PM
looks really good man keep it up.
11-05-2007, 02:25 PM
The top is very dark, could use some work. The green behind the text is too green, or too opac, maybe lower the visibility of it, I dunno...hm.
11-06-2007, 08:28 AM
thanks for the advice anymore?
11-06-2007, 12:14 PM
That's very nice man...An amazing job well done. I love the concept and the overall idea is great.
Love the colors as well.
11-06-2007, 08:08 PM
thanks guys ^_^
11-12-2007, 08:09 PM
11-12-2007, 08:45 PM
wow i love it... all amazing
who wrote the text? like originally...i love that last line
"God is Dead and only the ignorant weep."
11-13-2007, 10:00 AM
Life the little orbs, reminds me of final fantasy. v1/2 are my favorite. Maybe if you had to change something I would change the colors perhaps. Leave the green though.
v3 is my fav. Great work man...I really like it. :D I'm loving the green and bubbles. It reminds me of the laser from Independence Day lol. :D
i like it alot
its even better if thats one of your c4d's
~ Art ;
11-13-2007, 08:36 PM
Looks great man, love the middle of the C4D.
11-15-2007, 07:58 PM
You could of lighten up the top of the LP. Also you could of made it more colorful and add a different text. Overall great job.
11-19-2007, 09:51 PM
I di the text all except the last line which a quote from Friedrich nietche I believe and it's onetat has stuck with me for a long time.
and thanks for the support guys glad you enjoyed it even just a little bit
12-14-2007, 07:41 PM
12-14-2007, 08:47 PM
The post work is epic.
12-15-2007, 12:31 AM
12-15-2007, 04:26 AM
Nigh on perfect. Text is too hard to read. Needs to be bigger or a darker color or sharper.
12-15-2007, 10:49 AM
near the middle right. its a bit to dark
12-16-2007, 10:06 PM
yeah I see what ya mean
nice man, i liket the 2nd.
12-21-2007, 10:34 AM
Second looks best imo :)
only the focal is kinda big :)
would be better if only the tiny dodge lines spot/place would be the main focal.
so mayb a v4 with a that as focal :) ?
12-21-2007, 11:16 PM
<strike>Need MOAR green.</strike>
This is still nice but make text bigger.
12-22-2007, 02:45 AM
very nice, i love it gj!
12-22-2007, 02:05 PM
thanks for the feedback guys
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