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JL Beowolf
10-27-2007, 09:35 PM
heres another book cover or movie poster for "the umbrella Stories" that i made today. So i hope u like it.
Also plz tell me what to change in it.
http://wolfbeo3.deviantart.com/art/Last-Breath-68387510

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs19/f/2007/300/e/b/Last_Breath_by_wolfbeo3.jpg

JL Beowolf
11-01-2007, 09:21 PM
anybody?

[.BC.] KriPTiQ
11-01-2007, 09:25 PM
The splatter on her eye could be displaced/blended better, and it just doesn't appeal much to me overall. Keep trying though..

CarpeDiem
11-01-2007, 11:13 PM
The coloring of the lips. Not sure, but maybe it should be more detailed and fit on the lips better, or maybe you were going for that look.

star99
11-02-2007, 01:29 AM
ya i say blend the eye and the splater better then it would be better...