Last Breath //

[JL Beowolf]

heres another book cover or movie poster for "the umbrella Stories" that i made today. So i hope u like it.
Also plz tell me what to change in it.
http://wolfbeo3.deviantart.com/art/Last-Breath-68387510

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs19/f/2007/300/e/b/Last_Breath_by_wolfbeo3.jpg

[JL Beowolf]

anybody?

[[.BC.] KriPTiQ]

The splatter on her eye could be displaced/blended better, and it just doesn't appeal much to me overall. Keep trying though..

[CarpeDiem]

The coloring of the lips. Not sure, but maybe it should be more detailed and fit on the lips better, or maybe you were going for that look.

[star99]

ya i say blend the eye and the splater better then it would be better...