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[.BC.] KriPTiQ
10-22-2007, 12:49 AM
http://kriptiq.deviantart.com/art/ODYSSEY-67882358

C&C welcome. Tryin' to get better at these, I know this one's pretty plain.
:o

Calabur
10-22-2007, 09:27 AM
The planets look great, but the background needs more. Maybe a sort of cloudy texture?

[.BC.] KriPTiQ
10-22-2007, 10:50 AM
Thanks for the comment Calabur, I originally had one but it didnt look right with the lighting I have on the planets. meh

Pulse.
10-22-2007, 10:59 AM
pretty good for a first m8

[.BC.] KriPTiQ
10-22-2007, 10:49 PM
Thank ya, I updated it

Renagade
10-22-2007, 11:55 PM
The planets stick out too much. Try blending them in a bit more (they are a bit too sharp). The stars are too pixely. Try a blur when creating them. Lens flare needs to go.

Not bad.

[.BC.] KriPTiQ
10-24-2007, 12:30 AM
The planets stick out too much. Try blending them in a bit more (they are a bit too sharp). The stars are too pixely. Try a blur when creating them. Lens flare needs to go.

Not bad.[/b]

Fixed it up, i think... ha

LowIQ321
10-24-2007, 01:15 AM
Errr you need to:

1. Remember compisition. In order for a piece to be amazing it need to have flow and order
2. Nebulas don't apear in the shadow of a planet
3. Work on the color flow :) Green with gray planets does not really go together
4. Work on the nebulas/space dust

Great start

[.BC.] KriPTiQ
10-24-2007, 01:27 AM
One of my planets is green, you didn't look hard enough.