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Galione
09-05-2007, 08:45 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/ling_yoshima/acid-rain.png

tell me what ya think

k0shyX
09-05-2007, 09:10 PM
looking good, kinda bare on the left side though

Galione
09-05-2007, 10:05 PM
thanks I will see what I can do when i have a chance right now on an assignment

tutman
09-05-2007, 10:08 PM
i like how that looks good job =D

Galione
09-05-2007, 10:10 PM
thanks tutman

joeym4692
09-05-2007, 10:29 PM
nice i like it

great job, keep up the work

Galione
09-05-2007, 10:34 PM
ty

Xed
09-06-2007, 04:20 AM
i like it alot, good job, can i get the render?

Genes.Buffet
09-06-2007, 04:31 AM
Pretty good. But too much negative space on the left. I suggest you crop it off.

J.D
09-06-2007, 06:51 AM
It looks really really nice. A little empty at the very left side but that's alright

INTERNUTS.
09-06-2007, 06:52 AM
Ya, I agree about the upper left corner.

Looks a little plain and repetitive.

Over all, very nice though.

Birakon
09-06-2007, 07:10 AM
i love the feel of this sig, very creepy :)

Galione
09-06-2007, 09:28 AM
thanks guys and X I will pm you the link

D.Z.
09-06-2007, 05:07 PM
very nice, like the othas said, bare in the left, but still has good flow and it works man

Punk Vivid
09-06-2007, 05:50 PM
Nice work on the focal. The blur all over the tag is way too overpowering, making everything look fake and ugly to be honest. The colors could use some work. Try using selective coloring on the focal's face to make it more vivid. This way, it can be the focal, and you can remove the ugly blur around, and give everything a nice sharpen. Text is awful, and the yellow is too contrasted. Work on colors, and composition. Lighting needs improvement.