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Checa
09-05-2007, 10:07 AM
Hi all! Here it is! My last piece! =)

Feel free to add a comment and give your opinion, improving is my goal! =)

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y159/Checa/Firmas/TheDarkness.png

Thanks in advance!

Checa
09-05-2007, 12:30 PM
No comments? =(

MuSkAuG
09-05-2007, 02:06 PM
Just lower the opacity at some places on those "stars"(orange flying dots :P) a bit...
And I'd love it :D

Checa
09-05-2007, 02:16 PM
Changing it right now! =) Thank you very much the comment!

Checa
09-05-2007, 02:21 PM
Edited, lowered the opacity on some of the orange areas:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y159/Checa/Firmas/TheDarkness2.png

Better now? anything else i should change?

MuSkAuG
09-05-2007, 02:24 PM
Its better...
Maybe use a bit of Dogde tool and Burn tool, Dogde around the light spots and burn at the spots that should be dark?
And I migh think the colors are a bit dull, maybe try out some gradient maps and/or Photofilters?

.Enemy
09-05-2007, 02:40 PM
some cool effects... just needs more depth and lighting

Checa
09-05-2007, 02:49 PM
Ok, i'll keep working on it, thanks you both! =)

Link_2006
09-05-2007, 03:54 PM
I like the feel the signature has. It's good work.

I'd love to see how the signature would look if you made the orange dots a different shade of green (lighter). It would match and would probably give some better results.

Checa
09-05-2007, 06:42 PM
I already tried a light green, but it did not look very good because it was almost monochromo. Anyway, i'll get some time tomorrow and will see what i can get.

Thank you very much for the comments, guys! =)

Cheap_Indian
09-05-2007, 06:50 PM
It's not really my style therefore I don't really feel it that much. It is still ok, try working on the colors and depth. Maybe make less dots as well. :)

SF Mania
09-05-2007, 07:00 PM
Needs more contrast and better colours. Text also needs to go.
Effects are ok
Overall, not bad bro.

Checa
09-06-2007, 08:00 AM
Thanks for the constructive comments =D