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Cheap_Indian
09-03-2007, 01:33 PM
Currently auctioning this tag, but input is awesome anyways xD

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9168/fallingcopysy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Thanks,
Cheap

bOnZai
09-03-2007, 01:39 PM
Well, you should work on lightning a bit, else it's cool.

Arkassus
09-03-2007, 01:50 PM
The left could use some work and as said above the lighting needs work. Nice smudging.

Basaiken
09-03-2007, 02:01 PM
First off I would try adding a darker border, light colored borders don't work too well in my opinion.

Then theres this effect on the render, I'm guessing shes melting or something D:? I would erase that a bit or lower the Opacity.

Besides that it's pretty good :P. Maybe try adding a few Gradient Maps/Color Balances to mix up the colors a bit more.

.GeNeSis.
09-03-2007, 02:04 PM
Yeah work on it a lil more but everything else looks good... Gj 9/10

Cheap_Indian
09-03-2007, 06:39 PM
Ok, thanks for the comments :)

McLovin
09-03-2007, 06:42 PM
lighting's too strong
make the left side a bit darker
text = :[

MaikV
09-03-2007, 06:43 PM
little too light imo ,, not bad though gj

Cheap_Indian
09-03-2007, 06:54 PM
Adjusted the lighting :)

Cheap_Indian
09-05-2007, 06:40 PM
bump :P