View Full Version : Falling
09-03-2007, 12:33 PM
Currently auctioning this tag, but input is awesome anyways xD
09-03-2007, 12:39 PM
Well, you should work on lightning a bit, else it's cool.
09-03-2007, 12:50 PM
The left could use some work and as said above the lighting needs work. Nice smudging.
09-03-2007, 01:01 PM
First off I would try adding a darker border, light colored borders don't work too well in my opinion.
Then theres this effect on the render, I'm guessing shes melting or something D:? I would erase that a bit or lower the Opacity.
Besides that it's pretty good :P. Maybe try adding a few Gradient Maps/Color Balances to mix up the colors a bit more.
09-03-2007, 01:04 PM
Yeah work on it a lil more but everything else looks good... Gj 9/10
09-03-2007, 05:39 PM
Ok, thanks for the comments :)
09-03-2007, 05:42 PM
lighting's too strong
make the left side a bit darker
text = :[
09-03-2007, 05:43 PM
little too light imo ,, not bad though gj
09-03-2007, 05:54 PM
Adjusted the lighting :)
09-05-2007, 05:40 PM
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