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[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 01:12 AM
Ok fellow Graphic designers.

I see alot of threads that always die out at like 7 replies the most. ANd seeing as i vertually have no life outside this site and me being just that nice

I want all you to post links to recent work and i will 100% give quality C&C. NO im not the best designer but i give C&C as i see it..

If this works out really well they will sticky it so POST SOME LINKS...

;)

[.BC.] Aedus
11-06-2006, 01:17 AM
Heh sure.

C + C my current signature =o)

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-06-2006, 01:19 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1693/kimahrisigkl1.png

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1693/kimahrisigkl1.png

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 01:39 AM
Ok ok i'll do it in thread C&C then

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Aedus
I like the Tag alot but it seems a little flat. Try adding depth to it and add some lighting. i love the text placement and how you really did a awsome blending job.

7.5/10

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 02:55 AM
bump

OneTwo
11-06-2006, 04:22 AM
good idea dot. didn't know what this topic was, just checked it out... and yh, ur right... like im a nice guy too, ive been replyin to topics paaages back that have got no replies, and you see in my sig, my quote, and the quotes true... there's alot of activity, but if your topic dont have a good title, your not going to get any views and replies... but yh, you can c&c my sig I got for my fav... I only got 2 replies I think it was in my topic I did for it... ill comment on sigs that get posted here to, to help you out, and keep the topic bumped at the top...

dr. pepsi : right side = very cool... left side = plain and missing a spark... but yh, right side looks really cool... left side is a little plain... and doesn't flow good from left to right... cover that orangy bit, and it looks sweet... there's good lighting on the right to...

Aedus: like dot said, it's cool... but it lacks depth, and lighting will unlock a little bit of depth that you'll need to make your sig alot better... ;)

KimKiyaa
11-06-2006, 05:00 AM
Great idea guys :D

chicken jnr
11-06-2006, 05:53 AM
Here's mine Dot.

http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=284363

:D Cheers
-CJ

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 10:04 AM
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OneTwo
First one has IMO a little too much going on. The image seems flat but the bg effects are really nice.

The second one is really nice. ONly thing also is it looks a little flat and the lighting is overwhelming. I know were you were trying to get at with it. Great idea just work on it.
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*P.S* thanks for the help OneTwo ;)

The Enigma
11-06-2006, 10:12 AM
Not sure if you should really mention Rep :)

heres mine:

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3173/darkmetroidva4.jpg

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-06-2006, 10:27 AM
The Enigma:

it's very nice overall. great focal point and the lighting is nice. the BG on the right side has good variation, but perhaps the transition to the dark spots is too sudden you could smooth that out. but that's a small matter.

the text is understandably there to use up empty space, but i'm not sure the bar around it is the best presentation. my suggestion: scrap the existing text, darken the area, and have the text be glowing blue out from the darkness. perhaps blurr the text some in places.

vogue.
11-06-2006, 10:32 AM
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n177/DA_Vogue/cyborg.png
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n177/DA_Vogue/model3.png

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 10:37 AM
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Vogue
First- Coloring is really beautiful. I love how you gave it a mystyrious type of nature to it. The render really pops out and thats what makes it sooooooo sexy ;).
Text work is great on this. True artist 9.5/10

second-COLORS ARE WOW. Like everything is working out in this. The bar effect you got going is just so awsome. Really unique piece of work. text once again works great.
Not saying its needed but why not add a boarder?
9/10

Awsome work

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-06-2006, 10:38 AM
CnC this please:

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7063/alitastrikesig2uv0.png

no stock, BG made by me, render is a B/W manga scan prem vectored by me.

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 10:44 AM
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Dr. Pepsi
HOLY APPLE JUICE BATMAN!!!! :D
If thats the case then dude, awsome awsome work. I mean i thoguht the image was a stock with just text and lighting and thats it. Wow that just shows your creativity is in overdrive and the imagination you have is really extreme.

9.9/10 Just awsome

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-06-2006, 10:47 AM
thankies! :D

anyhoo, when i get 60 posts, i'll start posting my premium vectors in the premium renders section. they're good stuff. ;)

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 10:48 AM
Great stuff man.

Xed
11-06-2006, 10:50 AM
Not bad Doc..maybe add a final photofilter to bring all the colors together and a curves layer to finish it off, the perspective is a lil off bg should be lowered some cause the render to the mountains are on same field of depth see if ya was snapping that pic cam be almost ground level so you will see even more sky...not bad tho 7.5/10

my latest
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/X_ed/houdini.png

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4376/covenentvn0.png

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 10:55 AM
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X'ed
First-First offf i love the text. Its simple yet works so so well. The render is really sadistic in a calm way. THe bg effects and the lighting are awsome. I think it could use just a pintch of depth.

Second-Honestly im not really to crazy about it. I love the effect on the orb and the idea you had on it. But the overall presentation are off IMO.

Depth would bring it together i think and the text should change.

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-06-2006, 11:03 AM
thanks for the comments, X'ed. i was trying to make it as realistic as possible. ;) hence the realistic colors. however, you pointed out that thing about the mountains, which is very true. i was trying to make cliffs, kinda like a canyon, but i ended up making them into dirt hills. XD

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X'ed:

1. the BG is pretty cool here, i notice that the transition between the FG sharpness and the BG blur is a little abrupt on the right side. the render looks good, but the first part of the text is too small to be seen easily.

2. overuse of the vivacity filter. X_x also, typo in covenAnt.

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 11:42 AM
C'mon people. How many designers you know WANT TO ACTUALLY give C&C on your work? ;)

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-06-2006, 04:28 PM
Bumpage

Forcystus
11-06-2006, 04:31 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/9761/lolgorilla2zs4.png (http://imageshack.us)

there is my newest. ^_^

Forcystus
11-06-2006, 04:32 PM
edit, sorry for the double post.

Sexiom_____SPAM
11-06-2006, 05:13 PM
http://jix-corp.mythicx.com/srednabox/SexiomSigs/SPRITEWHIP99.png

My first sprite ever. =]

Prince Zainx
11-06-2006, 05:18 PM
yo bro :D
How about my two current :D

Zain

OneTwo
11-07-2006, 12:55 AM
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topdawg= cool gorillaz render, not really an effect and I dont really know what im looking at when im trying to figure out what the bg is... i like that, haha, bein confused.. makes it more interesting trying to figure it out, I think for a bright pink text out in the black isn't very good... stands out too much... prob should've tried to put it on a part of your bg and blended it in to make it flow good..

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sexiom= pretty cool for a first sprite... kinda flat, and there's not to much happening in the bg.. I do like how you used the gradient well to blend the text.. gj on that.. ;)

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zain= those focal points are so friggin hot, it takes away that there's alot of negative space, but it evens it all out with the cool effects and good renders... gj man, those are both killer..

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.X'ed= the first is better, second, I can see you tried to make some depth, but the bg's blurry and it just confuses the eye killing odd the depth... but your first one looks heaps cool, text is cool, stock is a bit gay... well depends how u think of it, but it fits in and looks good.. lighting isn't over done, gj man..

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-07-2006, 01:18 AM
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Zain
Both sprites are amazing. The first ones colors are terrific and the bg on it is awsome. The text on both works out nice. Overall both are 9/10

rReally great work

William.
11-07-2006, 01:23 AM
Most recent.
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b382/The_God/Virus-1.jpg

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-07-2006, 01:28 AM
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William

The render placement is sooo nice. i love the effects on the bottom of it. Looks as though hes being summoned. I love what you did with the text also..

ONly thin gim iffy about is around the hair. Seemsa a little too oversharpened. otherwise awsome

OneTwo
11-07-2006, 01:32 AM
william= the blue lighting looks cool... text looks good, kept nice n simple.. I dont really like the very right side, just looks like u brushed the blue on there, and it dont looks too good.. like dot. said, the hair kinda looks oversharpened, but nothing to cry about... overall, good job man..

OneTwo
11-07-2006, 08:20 AM
bumpage

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-07-2006, 10:42 AM
Bump

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-07-2006, 11:02 AM
Originally posted by William.@Nov 7 2006, 05:23 AM
Most recent.
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b382/The_God/Virus-1.jpg
3230786

you used my vector! :)

NOTE: the character is FEMALE! i'm working on a vector of her male counterpart, but PLEASE do not refer to Alita as a male. even tho it is a male name. :D

PROOF! :o (http://www.imagecross.com/images/2634really%20is%20a%20female.png)

i do think the hair and face are overly sharpened and contrasted. but the red on the arm is genius, it works really well. :) other than the face and hair issues, it's sweet.

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 02:32 AM
BUMP

ark™
11-08-2006, 03:19 AM
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l254/ark0125/flowergirlv1.jpg

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l254/ark0125/flowergirlv2.jpg

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l254/ark0125/flowergirlv3.jpg

started out making a sig .. but i like it MUCH better left as a large piece ... dont care for the sig kinda still wip .. or maybe i wont even finish it.

http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l254/ark0125/flowergirlv1v3sig.jpg

[.BC.] Dr. Pepsi
11-08-2006, 09:26 AM
as an LP, it pwns. the sig form is not that great, but the composition and colors fo the first piece are wonderful. great job!

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 10:07 AM
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ark
JUST BRAVO. I love the artistic simplicity you brought to it yet so much detail went into it. I LOVE the 1st and 3rd LP tho the most. I think the tag for could have been better executed by using only one of them and making it bigger with maybe some artistic type font?

Overall a really beautiful work of art. I love your creativity.
10/10-for LPs
8/10-Tag

ark™
11-08-2006, 12:22 PM
Originally posted by ™ .X-L.@Nov 8 2006, 08:07 AM
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[b]ark
JUST BRAVO. I love the artistic simplicity you brought to it yet so much detail went into it. I LOVE the 1st and 3rd LP tho the most. I think the tag for could have been better executed by using only one of them and making it bigger with maybe some artistic type font?

Overall a really beautiful work of art. I love your creativity.
10/10-for LPs
8/10-Tag
3233928


thx man

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 12:34 PM
Anytime...

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ark
*Might as well do your current also right?;)*

I like the overall green you have going. The render blends in really nice. ONly thing im not liking is the text. seems a little hard to read but i managed. Overall nice. also the bars on top and bottom would look better black..

Keep at it
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Great Milinko
11-08-2006, 01:53 PM
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m106/BlindSkater-GR/coolsprite.png

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m106/BlindSkater-GR/pimpinmasterchief2.png

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m106/BlindSkater-GR/kanyewestcopy.png

those are most recent

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 02:55 PM
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BlincSkater
First-Colors are dynamic. I love the colors on all of them, but especially the 1st and 3rd.

The renders go well on them. NOt too crazy about the halo one.

I like the type of sprite style you have up. Very unique.

G/j
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Pinocchio
11-08-2006, 03:13 PM
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7003/blindcopynp4.png
Thanks man :)

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 03:25 PM
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theArchitect?
Super super creative. i think the blind symbol in the middle could be a little bigger but i love the work around it.

Try adding some text. maybe some thats looks written on the wall...

mayhem1337
11-08-2006, 03:47 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/gotforce/renjispritesig.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/gotforce/hitsuspritesig2.jpg


thanks in advance :)

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 04:20 PM
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mayhem
I like them. But they seem to be really flat. Try adding some depth.

Love the text. Try working with more of a sprite type of format.
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Great Milinko
11-08-2006, 04:22 PM
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m106/BlindSkater-GR/sweetsprite.png

mayhem1337
11-08-2006, 05:13 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v247/gotforce/Phil.jpg

i know its a bit quick since my last rating :P but wondering if you could gimme some C&C on this new one.

ryanhennessey
11-08-2006, 06:38 PM
How about my recent ones?

1:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k114/hennessey292/Untitled-1copy-1.jpg

2:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k114/hennessey292/sig1.jpg

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
11-08-2006, 06:55 PM
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ryan
1-I like the bg on the first one and personaly cloud kicks ass. I also like the color tone you got going and text works out. Try adding a bit more depth tho..

2-Im not really liking it. THe purple doesent suit the render and the top left text doesent fit in.
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ryanhennessey
11-08-2006, 07:26 PM
Sorry for posting again so soon, but I left one out, only just finished it shortly before my last post. None of these are really the best cause I have barely used photoshop in close on 8 months, and this one here I think the render turned out too bright, but I still would like someone else's oppinion.

3:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k114/hennessey292/Untitled-2copy.jpg


And also, since you haven't looked at that one yet, here's yet another one for you to look at to, rather than creating a new topic or post. :)

4:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k114/hennessey292/Untitled-3copy.jpg

And while I'm at it this one too. And yes I have no life today, and am just constantly making sigs haha

5:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k114/hennessey292/Untitled-4copy.jpg

That will be the last one, for today anyway haha

OneTwo
11-10-2006, 07:20 AM
ryan= I think you could work on some depth... just leave some negative space & use different filters on different layers to try and create depth.. keep practicing it, seems u know how to use ps... u just got to fine tune your techiniques to make some awesome sigs.. keep it up man...

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
09-17-2007, 04:45 AM
WHy not bring this idea back? I'll continue doing what i was doing in the first place. :D

Nasuul
09-17-2007, 04:51 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/nasuul/darkengl-1.png

[.BC.] Fenix.Six
09-17-2007, 05:06 AM
Nasuul- Love the color varieation. Only thing is that it seems flat. Like the light sources aren't giving off that much light yet they seem bright. Maybe go over it with the burn tool and work on that. Also the text could be changed to fit better. Otherwise nice tag.

Cheap_Indian
09-17-2007, 06:26 PM
Please C/C both of my currents :)

Thanks,
Cheap

bdiddie
09-17-2007, 07:21 PM
http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=353568

KageRyu
09-18-2007, 01:51 AM
http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=353504 <= Both versions in the thread, please. ^^

Hoplite_A2
09-18-2007, 02:53 AM
Awesome idea! Plz sticky admins!

How bout this one -

http://s64.photobucket.com/albums/h176/hop...rent=Naruto.jpg (http://s64.photobucket.com/albums/h176/hoplite_A2/?action=view&current=Naruto.jpg)

And this one (stock) -

http://s64.photobucket.com/albums/h176/hop...current=gun.jpg (http://s64.photobucket.com/albums/h176/hoplite_A2/?action=view&current=gun.jpg)

Original: http://washington.uwc.edu/depts/compsci/cp...s/gungrave1.jpg (http://washington.uwc.edu/depts/compsci/cps139f06/zompj4160/images/pa5pics/gungrave1.jpg)

Thanks! ^_^