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leanback1977
09-24-2006, 07:40 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a375/LEANBACK1977/Snake.gif

mandator
10-20-2007, 06:09 AM
Nice, A bit to much reflection in my opinion, but looks good :)

LostUchiha
10-20-2007, 07:33 AM
Nice. Though the text is not all that great.

Hoplite_A2
10-20-2007, 09:24 AM
Hmmm...
Text is no good imo. :\
Sorry... It's way too big and the reflections
don't do it justice.

The render looks a little bit overblended too.
Try to make your focul more clear.

Colors aren't bad and the bg is ok.
But it needs some depth. :\
Lighting looks cool too.

Overall, it's not bad. :)
Keep it up.

P h o e n i X
10-20-2007, 09:27 AM
A bit too foggy, too much brushing. The focal isn't large enough, text def needs improvement. Try adding some depth and getting rid of that brushing over the render, then you might actually have a pretty decent tag. Keep at it! ^_^

becks
10-20-2007, 10:58 AM
not bad but theres to much on snake himelf maybe erase some stuff over him and the text placement is wrong dont put them in different sides maybe..